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ElectroLord99

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it's great :D

but when this song was starting up and building up, i think you shouldnt have added that offbeat hat sound, or that clap yet. let the melody introduce it's self and then have a drop with the beat, make the melody have a secondary buildup like u did, THEN put the beat in, but other then that, it was an amazing submition :)
keep it up

great :D

the synth's style is awesome, but the melody is too simple, if u worked on the melody this song would be amazing!!

Bracksta responds:

i thought about doing more solos and adding to the melody, but the three parts didn't combine at the end when i did that so i decided to keep it simple and jamin. thanks for the review bro. i check out your better off alone remix and really like how you built on the original and also liked the hardcore feel compared to the original.

omg woot!

i love the melody of the intro XD
it was so good :)
i just wish u kept going with it lol
i was shocked by how u knew how to change pitch in the music and all the effects u used on ur first song XD
sorry i got no constructive criticism for this song, since i've heard ur newer music, i now know u have imroved what u made wrong in this :P

photosyntesen responds:

thank you ;)

interesting...

the intro from 0:00 to 0:10 gave this song a good character, gave it what it needed to start off into a great song :) i give that part a 9/10
the beat that started at 0:11 was great, but it needs more variety. i give it 8/10
after those two starting points, there was a progression bassline at 0:34, it was short and sweet, it was good, went with the original bass, but took a bit from the main beat, i give that a 6/10
i didnt like the vocal at 0:57, its used too much and its lost meaning now :o but if i never heard it before, its pretty good :P i'll give it a 7/10
however, i really didnt enjoy the melody/beat thing that started at 1:02... sorry but it wasnt good for any sort of dance melody, uplifting or emotional feeling, it was just a filler, which wasnt expected after the vocal buildup... heh. i give that a 3/10

altogether, with the character and feeling from this song. i noticed you are only 14 and in ur first year of music :) so ill give u an 8 :D

sorry i didnt give much details on every aspect of the song, but i only had a few mins to review :o

peace ~ James.

photosyntesen responds:

thanks you say you would give it a 8 but you gave it 9 ? :D

this song is addictive...

it loops really well and for some reason it doesnt get boring.... make this into a song :D

awesome

all ur songs are so beautiful :)

great :)

the intro was so delicate i almost had some tears in my eyes

nice

the intro was beast XD

nice :D

i like the james bond bass string lol

damn

it was going good until u fucked the beat with the highhat sounds thing

I am a sagittarian monkey from canada. Check out some of my music :D I make a ton of wacky styles and like to use bass. My newer stuff is getting a different sound, so listen to my oldies too! then take a nap. it's good for you :3 -Opaix

Opaix @ElectroLord99

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Joined on 10/30/07

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