interesting...
the intro from 0:00 to 0:10 gave this song a good character, gave it what it needed to start off into a great song :) i give that part a 9/10
the beat that started at 0:11 was great, but it needs more variety. i give it 8/10
after those two starting points, there was a progression bassline at 0:34, it was short and sweet, it was good, went with the original bass, but took a bit from the main beat, i give that a 6/10
i didnt like the vocal at 0:57, its used too much and its lost meaning now :o but if i never heard it before, its pretty good :P i'll give it a 7/10
however, i really didnt enjoy the melody/beat thing that started at 1:02... sorry but it wasnt good for any sort of dance melody, uplifting or emotional feeling, it was just a filler, which wasnt expected after the vocal buildup... heh. i give that a 3/10
altogether, with the character and feeling from this song. i noticed you are only 14 and in ur first year of music :) so ill give u an 8 :D
sorry i didnt give much details on every aspect of the song, but i only had a few mins to review :o
peace ~ James.