hey man
i like this music, but i dont like the song... u know wut i mean?? i dunno lol. well, one thing, DONT plz dont only use preset loops... i used PL for one or two of my earlier compositions... but it got too boring... BECAUSE i heard other garageband users making very similar songs, which is not good. make custom loops, and try to make ur loops unique. i like to hear stuff i havent heard many times in other songs... its just not right! lol 8/10 4/5 because its ok i guess. (get rid of the damn piano at 1:02... it really sux...) other then that, i think ur gettin good at this :D